This page seemed to have an awful lot of dialog. I’m going to have to plan some more action-filled pages to balance it out some time in the future.
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Archive for April, 2011
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I’ve been regretting picking the name ‘Jackie Oldman’ now that the character is back in the story. I keep wanting to have the other characters call him by his last name, but then they’ll be calling him “Oldman,” and I’m afraid a reader will think that they’re saying “old man” instead. These are the things you don’t think of when you’re in a hurry to name a character….
