Another ‘meanwhile,’ and another scene jump. I worry sometimes that having these scenes running parallel makes for challenging reading in the web comic format. I am planning on collecting the current ‘Dark Legacy‘ storyline into a book eventually, but that won’t happen for awhile.
If you visit the Henchmen store, you can get The VIXX Saga collected in a trade paperback format. If you’re interested in purchasing a copy, the link to the store is here: http://henchmenforhire.bigcartel.com/product/the-vixx-saga-the-full-story
Comics fans will appreciate the name of the middle school….
You mentioned worrying about the scene changes and running in parallel would make for challenging reading. I think you do a good job of noting the scene changes, “meanwhile” and you have kept the flow of each scene moving too. Well done.
I agree very much with Tim. You did the scene change very well.
I didn’t even see the ‘meanwhile…” tag and caught on very quickly what was going on.